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Written as a sort of challenge to myself, encompassing two things in writing that I myself aren't comfortable with in order to push my boundaries...clop and incest.
Yeah...I'm a sick, twisted bastard.
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© 2013 - 2024 Tatsurou-san
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I wasn't to sure what to make of this. I finished it and thought about what to say and came up with this:

Flirting with the idea of incest is always a hard thing to do with out this being a mindless clop scene. I feel that you addessed it well by having Pound constantly reckognize that it is wrong, and make it plot point that he's wrestling with this dark desire.

It was an excellent twist that it was a dream, showing that while he did not give in just yet, the battle has all ready been lost in his mind.

The whole story was summed up nicely in your final two paragraphs with hin praying to the god of the sun to save his soul and then as well as the god of the night to give him what the darkest corners of his mind desires.

Well done.